Sunday, December 14, 2008

With You

Took your last breath, breathing my name,
wanting to see me before you left.
But I wasn't there to hold you by my side.
I was so out of my mind, I can never forgive myself.
But I couldn't seem to be able to say goodbye.

Head over heels,
I have been for you.
But how I feel,
won't matter to you.
Cos you're not there too see my heart-ache,
For you're no more here with me.
You've gone far away,
To a world I can't possibly call real.

A world that won't welcome me,
However hard I try.
They say its not my time yet.
But I am the one who's willing to die!
Just to be with you...

2 comments:

Sibyl said...

"A world that won't welcome me,
However hard I try.
They say its not my time yet.
But I am the one who's willing to die!
Just to be with you... "

Good work, my friend... :P

Poet In The Jar said...

Hahaha, I had just copied that exact part of the poem to quote in here, but Rose caught me first to it. :D

I was going to say that you had me in tears by that last stanza. Wonderful, wonderful work.