Eyes drowsing off to black,
As I walk towards the transcendental.
Sedated by the drug that can make me see
that can bring out the best in me.
Emotions trapped under my skin
Craving to be set free.
In my hypnotic sense of right and wrong
As I hover away from my agony.
I can know more than there is
to understand.
I can see things no one else can.
See that I'm finally opening up
Even though no one can notice that
Its the medications that enhance my emotions,
pleasing to look at.
Tranquilized in the state of hypnosis,
I can fully express what I truly mean,
Which I'd have otherwise kept hidden from you;
Letting them die, but for this medicated dream.
3 comments:
One hell of a poem! I really liked it, especially the last two stanzas, they just blow everything away... xP
The last 2 stanzas did?? *confused*
i dont think they are very good... bu thanks anyway.. :)
"Medicated dream" Very powerful. I see myself a lot in this one. I think all the stanzas rock but especially the last! So I kind of agree with FR ;)
I would normally tell you not to underestimate yourself, but all poets have self-doubt and I'd hate them if they didn't, so I'll skip it xD
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