Hold the keys to my heart,
And break into it stealthily.
Smashing the window,
Walk over the shards
And say it was neccessary.
Hold the glue that holds me up,
And watch me fall to pieces.
Smashing the concrete,
Walk all over me
And say it was necessary.
Just do whatever pleases you,
Even if that'll make me pay.
Do whatever suits you best,
As long as you wish to stay
And still say it was necessary.
4 comments:
This sounds a bit like "I'll Accept It Anyway"...
But yeah, it's good. The repeating of the lines works nicely. :)
"Smashing the concrete,
Walk all over me"
^^
And btw where did this come from? You haven't written poems since... dontrememberwhen and now you suddenly came up with three? :O
i know... xD
I just had the breakout, i guess :P
Thanks for liking it :)
That happens to me, too: I can't write anything for ages and then the inspiration comes flooding in! Which is better than nothing I think. :P
Like the new stuff, especially this one. :)
I love the rhythm. Could make a groovy song. I love love love it. Maybe because it's what I feel like right now...
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