Perfect.
Everything that you ever see.
Flawless.
Like it should always be.
I wonder if you've ever lied,
Or If you've ever missed the right spot.
I wonder if you've ever denied,
Being satisfied,
With all that you've got.
There in your Sugar-Coated life,
You keep facing the day
With that plastic smile.
There in your Sugar-Coated pride,
You keep standing on the top
With your head held high.
Hidden.
Something that I cannot see.
Missing.
Like it should never be.
I wonder if you've ever lied,
To yourself that everything was all right.
I wonder if you've ever denied,
Only wishing,
If there could be more to it.
There in your Sugar-Coated life,
Your feet are rooted on the floor,
By the burnt, charred remnants of it all.
There in your Sugar-Coated pride,
Looking down at what you've done
In your world where you're the only one.
3 comments:
"There in your Sugar-Coated pride,
Looking down at what you've done
In your world where you're the only one."
:o I love this one! I think it's magnificent, just the way it flows is flawless. great job!
thank you!! ^^
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I wonder if you've ever lied,
To yourself that everything was all right."
wow.
I like how this one flows, so easily.
I always admire poets who can make good rhymes :) because I can´t :) it just doesn´t happen :P
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