And watch them suffocate, die and bleed
When you know
Its more than just a few.
It pains to be called a "washed up star"
No more than a "has-been"
When you know
It can come back any time to you.
But you don't know when...
When the yesterdays outshine tomorrows
Who can not point the irony?
When your actions alone can bring you joy
How can you count on destiny?
There's meaning behind everything
But it takes more than eyes to see.
There'll be a time for me to breathe
Don't know when.
There'll be a Comeback Season for me
I'll wait till then...
4 comments:
okay..now this is Really Cool..seriously good piece of writing..i repeat what i might have repeated a gazillion times before.."HOW!! HOW!! do you come up with such nice shit..! Grr" I rly liked this one..
the first and third stanzas are especially good..'aches to lock ur treasures in a seed...' and 'when ur actions alone can bring u joy, how can u count on destiny..' awesome dude!!
I must admit, i m not a regular reader of ur writings, but man.. whenver i do read them ..they r just Massive!!
Aww Thanks a LOT Utkarsh! :D You have no idea how much this comment of yours means to me! :O
I dont think they're so grand :P but thanks a lot for saying that! :) Glad you liked it :)
hahaha! XD I really didn't mean them to be grand, u like them, that's good enough.
Keep writing such pieces and then maybe i will drop by more often.. :) [Not that you need my devotion..but yeah..]
Excellent! Keep it up!
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