Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Sugar-coated

Perfect.
Everything that you ever see.
Flawless.
Like it should always be.

I wonder if you've ever lied,
Or If you've ever missed the right spot.
I wonder if you've ever denied,
Being satisfied,
With all that you've got.

There in your Sugar-Coated life,
You keep facing the day
With that plastic smile.

There in your Sugar-Coated pride,
You keep standing on the top
With your head held high.

Hidden.
Something that I cannot see.
Missing.
Like it should never be.

I wonder if you've ever lied,
To yourself that everything was all right.
I wonder if you've ever denied,
Only wishing,
If there could be more to it.

There in your Sugar-Coated life,
Your feet are rooted on the floor,
By the burnt, charred remnants of it all.

There in your Sugar-Coated pride,
Looking down at what you've done
In your world where you're the only one.

3 comments:

Chels said...

"There in your Sugar-Coated pride,
Looking down at what you've done
In your world where you're the only one."
:o I love this one! I think it's magnificent, just the way it flows is flawless. great job!

Ayan said...

thank you!! ^^

Roccari said...

"
I wonder if you've ever lied,
To yourself that everything was all right."

wow.
I like how this one flows, so easily.

I always admire poets who can make good rhymes :) because I can´t :) it just doesn´t happen :P